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Creating Writers Through 6-Trait Writing Assessment and Instruction 5th edition [Minkštas viršelis]

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  • Formatas: Paperback / softback, 432 pages, aukštis x plotis: 276x216 mm, weight: 780 g
  • Išleidimo metai: 14-Dec-2010
  • Leidėjas: Pearson
  • ISBN-10: 020561910X
  • ISBN-13: 9780205619108
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  • Formatas: Paperback / softback, 432 pages, aukštis x plotis: 276x216 mm, weight: 780 g
  • Išleidimo metai: 14-Dec-2010
  • Leidėjas: Pearson
  • ISBN-10: 020561910X
  • ISBN-13: 9780205619108
Kitos knygos pagal šią temą:
Spandel, pioneer of the six-trait method for teaching, provides a framework for helping middle and elementary students draft, assess, and revise their own and others' writing, based on six traits of writing: ideas, organization, voice, word choice, sentence fluency, and conventions. The voices of real writing teachers, and papers from real- life students, give insight into using the method in the classroom. Discussion questions and activities for teachers are included. This fifth edition contains new writing lessons and an increased emphasis on informational writing, plus expanded material on diverse learning styles. Spanish translations are given for some student rubrics and handouts. Spandel, a consultant, has worked as a language arts teacher. Annotation ©2009 Book News, Inc., Portland, OR (booknews.com)

Written by the pioneer of 6-trait writing, this fifth edition brings everything up to date, offering a comprehensive overview of the best education strategies and philosophies of writing assessment and instruction. It provides clear guidelines on helping students draft, assess, and revise their writing, as well as explicit criteria to show students precisely what they must do to succeed as writers in virtually any situation. Because the six traits are so widely used at the state level, many school districts are incorporating them into state standards and state assessments. This book can dramatically help teachers to prepare their students for success on state tests and beyond. Give students the preparation they need to become writers for life!

 

  • New lessons, suggested by numerous teachers throughout the country--all tested and tried with students in the classroom!
  • Lesson ideas connected to sample papers, offering students many opportunities to learn and practice revision skills.
  • Updated rubrics, offering greater clarity and ease of use, including:
    • a teacher favorite, the Leap the River 6-point model, that shows students precisely when and how writing moves from beginning levels (in need of revision) to proficient levels (demonstrating strength).
    • a brand-new 3-level rubric that can be adapted as a 5- or 6-point scale. This model offers students and teachers more flexibility than they have ever had in a rubric, with the descriptive richness of the 5-point scale and the thoroughness and precision of the 6-point.
  • New teacher voices in Chapter 10 to offer a wide range of instructional ideas. The author explicitly identifies key strategies, making this chapter much more user friendly and easy to skim for favorite moments.
  • Spanish translations offered for some key items: "Leap the River" rubric for students, a Spanish student checklist, and--also brand new--Spanish trait summaries for use by teachers in introducing the traits.
  • Strategies for challenged writers–-and for those who need a challenge–-are part of virtually every chapter, from lessons to process to recommendations from teachers. Those who work with struggling writers will gain ideas for making revision small and manageable, while those who work with more advanced students will discover ways to make trait-based writing as challenging as their students can handle.
  • New primary continuums invite even the youngest writers into the trait-based classroom, all while emphasizing instruction, exploration, and discovery–-not assessment.
  • Study group discussion questions and activities offer challenging and diverse ways for study groups or students in a writing class to extend their learning and work in teams. This book is intended to be used by groups who are serious about rethinking and redesigning their writing instruction and who wish to make the six traits part of that plan.
  • Increased emphasis on informational writing appears throughout the book, both in examples and in lessons.

Recenzijos

"As a teacher-leader, I recommend Vicki Spandel's materials to fellow teachers, local, county, and state administrators, college professors, and student teachers. Her books, teaching guides, and podcasts never fail to impress educators from a wide variety of backgrounds and experience. Most importantly, her materials show students of all grade levels how to become stronger authentic writers."

- Barbara Andrews, A.C.Stelle Middle School, Calabasas, CA

 

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Written by the pioneer of 6-trait writing, this fifth edition brings everything up to date, offering a comprehensive overview of the best education strategies and philosophies of writing assessment and instruction. It provides clear guidelines on helping students draft, assess, and revise their writing, as well as explicit criteria to show students precisely what they must do to succeed as writers in virtually any situation. Because the six traits are so widely used at the state level, many school districts are incorporating them into state standards and state assessments. This book can dramatically help teachers to prepare their students for success on state tests and beyond. Give students the preparation they need to become writers for life!

 





New lessons, suggested by numerous teachers throughout the country--all tested and tried with students in the classroom! Lesson ideas connected to sample papers, offering students many opportunities to learn and practice revision skills. Updated rubrics, offering greater clarity and ease of use, including:

a teacher favorite, theLeap the River 6-point model, that shows students precisely when and how writing moves from beginning levels (in need of revision) to proficient levels (demonstrating strength). a brand-new 3-level rubric that can be adapted as a 5- or 6-point scale. This model offers students and teachers more flexibility than they have ever had in a rubric, with the descriptive richness of the 5-point scale and the thoroughness and precision of the 6-point.



New teacher voices in Chapter 10 to offer a wide range of instructional ideas. The author explicitly identifies key strategies, making this chapter much more user friendly and easy to skim for favorite moments. Spanish translations offered for some key items: "Leap the River" rubric for students, a Spanish student checklist, and--also brand new--Spanish trait summaries for use by teachers in introducing the traits. Strategies for challenged writers-and for those who need a challenge-are part of virtually every chapter, from lessons to process to recommendations from teachers. Those who work with struggling writers will gain ideas for making revision small and manageable, while those who work with more advanced students will discover ways to make trait-based writing as challenging as their students can handle. New primary continuums invite even the youngest writers into the trait-based classroom, all while emphasizing instruction, exploration, and discovery-not assessment. Study group discussion questions and activities offer challenging and diverse ways for study groups or students in a writing class to extend their learning and work in teams. This book is intended to be used by groups who are serious about rethinking and redesigning their writing instruction and who wish to make the six traits part of that plan. Increased emphasis on informational writing appears throughout the book, both in examples and in lessons.
Foreword ix
Preface xi
Acknowledgments xiii
Creating a Vision
1(14)
Who Invented the Six Traits?
2(3)
Assessing to Learn: The Bridge to Revision
5(1)
Ten Reasons to Make Six-Trait Writing Part of Your Instruction
6(6)
Building a Personal Vision
12(1)
Chapter! in a Nutshell
13(1)
Study Group: Interactive Questions and Activities
13(2)
Creating Assessment to Match the Vision
15(22)
Keys to Quality Assessment
16(9)
Holistic 6-Trait Scale (Figure 2.3)
20(2)
Horizontal and Vertical Integrity (Figure 2.4)
22(3)
Large-Scale and Classroom Assessment: Lessons from Two Perspectives
25(1)
Lessons Learned from Large-Scale Assessment
26(6)
A Few Good Prompts (Figure 2.5)
28(1)
Barry's Prompts (Figure 2.6)
29(1)
Rules of the Road for Writing Prompts (Figure 2.7)
30(1)
Twelve Tips for Succeeding on Writing Tests (Figure 2.8)
31(1)
Lessons Learned from Classroom Assessment
32(3)
Chapter 2 in a Nutshell
35(1)
Study Group: Interactive Questions and Activities
35(2)
Warming Up---and Scoring Well
37(22)
What Makes Writing Work (Figures 3.1 and 3.2)
38(1)
Building a Community of Writers
39(3)
The Redwoods (Figure 3.3)
39(2)
Mouse Alert (Figure 3.4)
41(1)
What Teachers Value in Writing
42(5)
What Teachers Value in Writing (Figure 3.5)
43(1)
Teacher Six-Point Writing Guide (Figure 3.6)
44(3)
War of the Rubrics
47(2)
Getting Ready to Score Papers
49(1)
Suggested Scores and Comments
50(2)
Scoring Grid Master (Figure 3.7)
50(2)
Making Your Scoring Consistent
52(5)
Pet Peeves (Figure 3.9)
56(1)
Chapter 3 in a Nutshell
57(1)
Study Group: Interactive Questions and Activities
57(2)
Building a Foundation: Ideas and Organization
59(26)
Ideas: The Heart of It All
60(1)
Ideas ``Shortie'' (Figure 4.1)
67
Practice Papers
61(3)
Paper 1: Making Decisions (Expository, Grade 8)
62(1)
Paper 2: Harder Than You Think (Personal Essay, Grade 10)
63(1)
Organization: Showcasing It
64(1)
Organization ``Shortie'' (Figure 4.2)
65(1)
Practice Papers
65(3)
Paper 3: Some Cartoons Are Violent! (Persuasive, Grade 3)
66(1)
Paper 4: The Baseball (Narrative, Grade 5)
67(1)
Looking At Additional Papers
68(15)
Paper 5: Unscripted Television: Enjoy It While You Can (Persuasive, Middle School)
68(2)
Paper 6: Einstein (Informational, Grade 5)
70(1)
Paper 7: Writing Today (Persuasive, Grade 9)
71(2)
Paper 8: A Great Book (Literary Analysis, Grade 8)
73(1)
Paper 9: Writing Is Important (Expository, Grade 11)
74(1)
Paper 10: Under the Knife (Expository, Grade 12)
75(2)
Paper 11: Be Happy With What You Have (Literary Analysis, Grade 3)
77(1)
Paper 12: How to Be a Good Driver (Expository, Grade 12)
78(1)
Paper 13: The Funeral of My OREO (Narrative, Grade 4)
79(1)
Paper 14: Computing Batting Averages (Expository, Grade 6)
80(2)
Paper 15: Cats or Dogs (Persuasive, Grade 6)
82(1)
Chapter 4 in a Nutshell
83(1)
Study Group: Interactive Questions and Activities
83(2)
Adding Flavor: Voice, Word Choice, and Sentence Fluency
85(28)
Voice: Fingerprints on the Page
86(1)
Voice ``Shortie'' (Figure 5.1)
87(1)
Practice Papers
87(4)
Books (From Which) You'll Love Reading Aloud (Figure 5.2)
88(1)
Paper 1: Why You Need a Job (Persuasive, Grade 9)
89(1)
Paper 2: Zeena and the Marshmallows (Persuasive, Grade 5)
90(1)
Word Choice: The Bridge from Message to Voice
91(3)
Word Choice ``Shortie'' (Figure 5.3)
91(1)
Paper 3: Chad (Descriptive, Grade 3)
92(1)
Paper 4: Pets Are Forever (Informational, Grade 8)
93(1)
Sentence Fluency: Variety and Rhythm
94(4)
Sentence Fluency ``Shortie'' (Figure 5.4)
94(1)
Paper 5: A Rescue (Narrative, Grade 4)
95(1)
Paper 6: The Mysteries of Birds of Prey (Informational, Grade 5)
96(2)
Looking at Additional Papers
98(13)
Paper 7: A Sunflower Seed (Expository/Reflective, Grade 5)
98(1)
Paper 8: Reflecting on Saba and History (Memoir, Grade 7)
99(3)
Paper 9: Reflections on Writing (Personal Essay, Grade 12)
102(1)
Paper 10: Fishing (Narrative/Expository, Grade 11)
102(2)
Paper 11: Review of Exploring the Weather (Literary Review, Grade 8)
104(1)
Paper 12: You Whant to Be My Friend? (Personal Essay, Grade 3)
105(1)
Paper 13: Homeless (Narrative/Memoir, Grade 6)
106(1)
Paper 14: Movies and Books: A Comparison (Comparative Analysis, Grade 8)
107(2)
Paper 15: Why I Write (Expository, Grade 7)
109(2)
Chapter 5 in a Nutshell
111(1)
Study Group: Interactive Questions and Activities
111(2)
Framing the Picture: Conventions and Presentation
113(24)
Conventions and Presentation: Editing and Framing
114(1)
Conventions ``Shortie'' (Figure 6.1)
114(1)
Practice Papers
115(4)
Paper 1: Haircut from Hell (Narrative/Imaginative, Grade 6)
117(1)
Paper 2: The Ritual of Sticks and Rocks (Imaginative, Grade 6)
118(1)
Examples of Presentation
119(3)
Putting All Traits Together
122(13)
Paper 3: File Sharing Is Not the Spawn of Satan (Persuasive/Expository Grade 12)
122(2)
Paper 4: A Beautiful Dream (Memoir, Grade 12)
124(2)
Paper 5: A Strange Visiter (Narrative/Imaginative, Grade 5)
126(1)
Paper 6: The Day My Grandfather Died (Narrative, Grade 4)
127(1)
Paper 7: Let a Non-Natural-Born Citizen Be President (Persuasive, Grade 7)
128(1)
Paper 8: Computer Blues (Narrative, Grade 12)
129(2)
Paper 9: The Pirate Ship (Descriptive, Grade 5)
131(1)
Paper 10: The Woman a.k.a. the P.B. J. (Persuasive/Expository, Grade 12)
132(2)
Paper 11: A Collaboration of Thoughts on Art (Essay, Grade 10)
134(1)
The Next Step
135(1)
Chapter 6 in a Nutshell
135(1)
Study Group: Interactive Questions and Activities
135(2)
Using Traits to Support Writing Process
137(16)
Learning Process from the Inside Out
138(1)
Getting Started
139(1)
What about Genres?
139(1)
Connecting Traits to Process
139(1)
Important Things to Model for Students (Figure 7.1)
140(1)
Experience: Where Ideas Come From
140(3)
Traits Supporting Process (Figure 7.2)
141(2)
Prewriting/Rehearsing: Giving Shape to the Ideas We've Chosen
143(2)
Webbing Example (Figure 7.3)
143(1)
Listeners' Questions (Figure 7.4)
144(1)
Sally's Life Map (Figure 7.5)
144(1)
Drafting: Going From Beginning to End
145(1)
Sharing Your Voice with an Audience
146(1)
Revising: Letting the Traits Shine
147(2)
Editing: Making the Reader Feel ``At Home'' in Your Text
149(1)
Publishing: Honoring and Preserving Writing
150(1)
Assessing: For Students, the First Step in Revising
150(1)
Chapter 7 in a Nutshell
151(1)
Study Group: Interactive Questions and Activities
151(2)
Unlocking the Door to Revision
153(56)
Starting with Process...
154(1)
...then Workshop
154(1)
Giving It Power
155(1)
Guess What? You're Already Doing it...
155(1)
Connecting to Research
156(1)
Making a Plan
157(1)
Four Keys to Success
158(13)
Key 1: Surround Students with Writers' Language
158(1)
Key 2: Teach Students to Assess Writing
158(1)
Student Six-Point ``Leap the River'' Writing Guide (Figure 8.1)
159(6)
Student Checklist (Figure 8.2)
165(1)
Simple Checklist (Figure 8.3)
166(2)
Key 3: Call on Literary Mentors for Examples
168(2)
Key 4: Use Focused Lessons and Strategies to Build Skills
170(1)
Planning Lessons (Figure 8.5)
171(1)
Lessons and Strategies for Ideas
171(6)
Sensory Details Chart (Figure 8.7)
174(3)
Lessons and Strategies for Organization
177(4)
Out-of-Order Lines from Sneed B. Collard's The Deep-Sea Floor (Figure 8.10)
179(2)
Lessons and Strategies for Voice
181(6)
Lessons and Strategies for Word Choice
187(3)
Lessons and Strategies for Sentence Fluency
190(7)
Lessons and Strategies for Conventions
197(7)
Copy Editors' Symbols (Figure 8.25)
198(1)
Copy Editors' Symbols for Young Writers (Figure 8.26)
199(5)
A Message for Parents and Other Caregivers
204(1)
Chapter 8 in a Nutshell
204(1)
Study Group: Interactive Questions and Activities
204(5)
What to Tell Parents about Conventions (Figure 8.29)
205(4)
Troubleshooting: Dealing with Common Writing; Problems
209(40)
Problems with Ideas
210(4)
Nonfiction Read-Alouds (Figure 9.2)
212(2)
Problems with Organization
214(7)
Informational ``Map'' on Nutrition (Figure 9.5)
219(2)
Problems with Voice
221(5)
Problems with Word Choice
226(3)
New Words (Figure 9.8)
227(2)
Problems with Sentence Fluency
229(4)
Problems with Conventions
233(2)
Sample Style Sheet (Figure 9.9)
234(1)
Helping Challenged/Beginning Writers
235(4)
For Students Who Need a Challenge
239(7)
Plan for Revision (Figure 9.14)
244(2)
Chapter 9 in a Nutshell
246(1)
Study Group: Interactive Questions and Activities
247(2)
Listening to Teachers' Voices
249(20)
In Elaine's Self-Contained Sixth Grade Classroom
250(1)
In Jim's High School Classroom
251(2)
Writing Coach Checklist (Figure 10.1)
252(1)
In Billie's Seventh Grade Classroom
253(3)
Reading, Traits, and Connections (Figure 10.2)
255(1)
In Ellen's AP English Classroom
256(1)
In Judy's Third Grade Classroom
257(2)
In Barbara's Middle School Classroom
259(1)
In Andrea's Multi-Age Second-Language Classroom
260(2)
Thoughts, Feelings, Actions (Figure 10.5)
262(1)
In Sue's Elementary Art-Based Classroom
262(3)
In Sammie's ``Tiger Learning Center''
265(1)
Chapter 10 in a Nutshell
266(1)
Study Group: Interactive Questions and Activities
267(2)
Going Informational
269(38)
Teacher Six-Point Informational Writing Guide (Figure 11.1)
271(3)
Student Six-Point Informational Writing Guide (Figure 11.2)
274(3)
Sample Papers
277(27)
Paper 1: Black Widows (Informational, Grade 3)
277(1)
Paper 2: Bears in the Wild (Informational, Grade 4)
278(2)
Paper 3: Thomas Alva Edison: Wizard of Menlo Park (Informational, Grade 5)
280(1)
Paper 4: Driving Tests Should Be Harder (Persuasive, Grade 7)
281(2)
Paper 5: Humboldt Penguins (Informational, Grade 9)
283(2)
Paper 6: The Middle Ages (Informational, Grade 7)
285(1)
Paper 7: Life in the Middle Ages (Informational, Grade 9)
286(2)
Paper 8: Solar Energy (Informational, Grade 9)
288(2)
Paper 9: Kill Measurement 34---Now! (Persuasive, Grade 8)
290(2)
Paper 10: The Violin (Informational, Grade 10)
292(1)
Paper 11: Libraries (Informational, Grade 9)
293(2)
Paper 12: Expanded Definition: Resonance (Technical, College)
295(2)
Paper 13: Pablo Picasso (Informational, Grade 7)
297(1)
Paper 14: Desert Tortoise (Informational, Grade 7)
298(2)
Paper 15: The Chameleon (Informational, Grade 4)
300(2)
Paper 16: The Giant Panda (Informational, Grade 4)
302(2)
Chapter 11 in a Nutshell
304(1)
Study Group: Interactive Questions and Activities
305(2)
Exploring the World of Beginning Writers
307(42)
Teaching Ourselves What to Look For
308(1)
Paper I: Bat and Spider (Age 4)
309(1)
Paper 2: Mike's Note (Age 4)
309(1)
Helping Writers See Their Strengths
309(1)
How the Traits Look Early On
310(2)
Ideas for Teaching Traits to Beginners
312(13)
Paper 3: Clouds (Grade 2)
312(1)
Paper 4: Sam Is My Friend (Grade 1)
313(1)
Paper 5: My Favorite Brother Is Nick (Grade 1)
313(1)
Paper 6: I Like My Library (Grade 1)
314(1)
Paper 7: Catdog Shopping (Grade 1)
315(1)
Paper 8: Mason's First Book (Kindergarten)
315(1)
Paper 9: Old (Grade 3)
316(1)
Paper 10: Dear Tooth Fairy ((Wade 2)
317(1)
Paper 11: Jamey the Cat (Grade 2)
317(1)
Paper 12: Brad's Pyramid (Grade 2)
318(1)
Paper 13: Mr. Bear Is Loving (Kindergarten)
319(1)
Paper 14: My Grocery List (Kindergarten)
319(1)
Paper 15: My To-Do List (Kindergarten)
319(1)
Paper 16: My Winter Vacation (Grade 2)
320(1)
Thinking Like a Writer Posters (Figure 12.1)
321(4)
Favorite Books for Primary
325(13)
Paper 17: Guess Why I Like School? (Grade 1)
330(1)
Paper 18: My Dog (Anonymous)
331(3)
Paper 19: Dictated Story About the Coyote (Grade 2)
334(1)
Simple Editing Checklist for Primary Students (Figure 12.3)
335(1)
Advanced Editing Checklist for Primary Students (Figure 12.4)
335(1)
Copy Editors' Symbols for Beginning Writers (Figure 12.6)
336(2)
Use Continuums to Chart Growth
338(7)
Primary Continuums (Figure 12.9)
339(6)
Create a World of Print
345(1)
Chapter 12 in a Nutshell
346(1)
Study Group: Interactive Questions and Activities
346(3)
Communicating with Students
349(24)
... Through Comments
350(5)
... Through Conferences
355(2)
Two-Minute Conference Topics (Figure 13.2)
356(1)
... Through Peer Response Groups
357(3)
... Through Grades
360(8)
Scores for Chris on Five Assignments (Figure 13.5)
367(1)
... Through Communication with Parents and Other Caregivers
368(2)
Chapter 13 in a Nutshell
370(1)
Study Group: Interactive Questions and Activities
370(3)
Expanding the Vision
373(9)
Appendices
382(29)
Appendix 1 Teacher Three-Level Writing Guide (Adaptable to 5- or 6-Point)
382(3)
Appendix 2 Student Three-Level Writing Guide (Adaptable to 5- or 6-Point)
385(3)
Appendix 3 Student ``Leap the River'' Writing Guide in Spanish
388(6)
Appendix 4 Student Checklist in Spanish
394(1)
Appendix 5 Trait ``Shorties'' in Spanish
395(2)
Appendix 6 Student Checklists (and Simplified Checklists)
Narrative Writing
397(1)
Informational Writing
398(1)
Persuasive Writing
399(1)
Literary Analysis
400(1)
Appendix 7 Teacher Three-Level Informational Writing Guide (Adaptable to 5- or 6-Point)
401(3)
Appendix 8 Student Three-Level Informational Writing Guide (Adaptable to 5- or 6-Point)
404(3)
Appendix 9 Sample Correlations
407(3)
Appendix 10 Blank Master of Lesson Planning Chart (Figure 8.5)
410(1)
References 411(4)
Index 415
Vicki Spandel has worked as a language arts teacher, editor, journalist, technical writer, and award winning video producer. In 1984, Vicki coordinated the 17-member teacher team out of Beaverton, Oregon who developed the original, internationally recognized 6-trait model for writing assessment and instruction. Since that time, she has served as scoring director for more than 75 state, county, and district writing assessments, and has developed instructional writing materials for students K through college. She is a frequent visitor in writing classrooms, providing coaching on writing, revision, and editing. Vicki is the author or co-author (with Jeff Hicks) of more than 30 books for teachers and students, including Creating Young Writers, second edition (Allyn and Bacon), The 9 Rights of Every Writer (2005, Heinemann), The Write Traits Classroom Kits, Grades 1 through 8, Write Traits Advanced, Grades 9 through 12, and most recently, Write Traits Kindergarten: Bringing the Traits to Kinderwriters (all of Great Source). She lives with her family in the beautiful Three Sisters Wilderness area of Central Oregon.